Narrative
Cards
Chicago, 1931.
The freezing night wind blew Dean’s
black hair. It was a dead night. No one passed at that street. Just a poorly
lit street in an abandoned area. Dean stopped in front of a shop door. The
29-year-old lad looked at a rather worn out poster. His blue eyes began to
tear. He remembered about an incident which happened last week. The incident which
involved Christine, his late wife-to-be.
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“Are you free this Sunday,
Christine?” asked Dean.
Dean sipped his coffee served by
the restaurant waiter.
“Yeah. Why?” answered Christine
as she tied her long blond hair using a hair tie.
Christine’s tall figure and
beauty made her very popular in her workplace. And, the fact that she was the
only daughter of the town chief was just risen her popularity. She had a kind,
polite, and discipline personality, despite her status as a mayor daughter.
“Will you have a dinner with me
after work? At the White Swan Restaurant. I want to tell something important to
you,” said Dean.
He had been dating Christine for
a long time since he was a college student. Dean was also popular among his
friends. He was tall, handsome, and had a calm personality.
“Sure. I’ll leave that time open
for you. Oh, the lunch break is almost over. See you later, Dean!” answered Christine
as she grabbed her handbag and walked away.
“Yes! Perfect!” yelled Dean in
his heart.
Dean took something from his
shirt pocket. A small golden ring engraved with D and C letters on the inner side.
Dean ordered two pieces of it last week at his goldsmith friend.
Dean stood up from his chair and
paid the bill at the counter. He kept smiling and humming on his way back to
his office. His eyes caught on a poster in his office information board. A
poster released by the police about a serial murder case. A really peculiar
case to be happened in such a rural town. There were been 7 victims so far. The
criminal always left a heart poker card in the victims’ shirt pocket. The cards
were like a countdown, started from a 10-heart poker card on the first victim
and a 4-heart poker card on the last victim. The victims order was peculiar, too. The first victim was a man, then the second victim was a woman, the next
victim was a man, the victim after that was a woman, and so on.
“A stupid case, isn’t it? Don’t
they have another thing to do other than killing people?” said a man to Dean.
Dean turned his head toward his
right side. There stood a slight shorter man with green eyes smiling at him.
His short haircut and clean face made him look younger than Dean although he
was older in fact.
“Oh. Hey, Phil. Yeah. We still
don’t know their motive and the police haven’t found a real clue either. I hope
they catch the criminal immediately and we can live at peace again,” said Dean.
“Speaking of the motive. Have
you thought that the motive maybe a love-related problem? Well, by looking at
the heart poker cards, maybe the victims had love problems with the criminal. Or
maybe the criminal had one-sided love toward the victims.” asked Phil to Dean
curiously.
“No way. That’s ridiculous. Do
you think the criminal love both men and women? Perhaps the criminal did that
just for attracting some attention. Hahaha,” laughed Dean, walking toward his
working room on the second floor leaving Phil alone.
Dean could hear Phil laughing from
the staircase.
Day by day felt really slowly for
Dean. He couldn’t wait for Sunday to come. And finally, the long awaited Sunday
evening came.
A bright room, bunch of roses
everywhere, and a romantic song gave a perfect atmosphere for some romantic
dinner. Dean was sitting down, waiting for Christine impatiently despite his
calm nature. He kept glancing at his Breguet on his left wrist. Sometimes, he
checked on his attire. A white shirt, a black tie, and a black suit paired with
black trousers was his attire that night. A great attire to propose a partner
for life. He smiled, imagining a beautiful life with Christine as his wife,
spending their life together with their children.
Thirty minutes had passed. Dean
became worried because it was unusual for Christine to come late. Dean decided
to pay his bill and went to Christine’s house.
On his way to Christine’s house,
at South Prairie Ave, Dean saw a lot of people gathering near a dark alley. His
curiosity drove him to approach the bunch.
“What happened, Madam?” asked
Dean to a rather thin old lady wearing light blue long dress in front of him.
“A woman had been stabbed in the
heart and dead. There is a card sticking out in her shirt pocket. And, she
seems familiar, too, but I can’t remember,” said the old lady with a trembled
voice.
Dean shocked and feeling really
worried. He suddenly remembered the serial murder case. He tried to break through
the bunch and hoped his fear was wrong.
Dean’s worst fear came true. The Sunday
evening that should become the best day on his life had become a nightmare. His
knees felt weak. He fell on his knees. Tears flowed down from his blue eyes.
“Why do this happen to you,
Christine?” sobbed Dean in a weak voice. He couldn’t contain his grief.
There laid Christine on the
ground with a stab wound in her chest. Blood flowed out from the wound and
pooled around her body. The white blouse she worn turned red, soaked with her
blood.
A young lad in black leather coat
braved himself and took the card from Christine’s chest pocket. And, as
expected by the bunch, it was a 3-heart poker card that had turned red
partially because of the blood. Dean’s anger grew when he saw the card and
swore to himself that he will avenge the criminal for Christine’s death.
Next day, a funeral held for
Christine. The funeral was attended by many people including Dean, Phil, and
Christine’s workmates. Dean was crying throughout the funeral and was then consoled
by Phil. Although he was grateful to Phil for consoling him, Dean still could
get rid the grief of losing Christine. He kept crying until he got home after
the funeral ended.
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“Aaaarrrrggghh! Heeeelp!”
A loud scream woke Dean up from
his daze. He wept his tears and ran toward the source of the scream. He took a
gun which he bought from a black market from his trousers back pocket.
In the back of an abandoned store,
Dean saw a dark figure standing, leaning his body to a broken window. Dean can
saw clearly because it was rather dark. He took out a flashlight from his
trousers pocket and pointed it to the dark figure. To his surprise, Dean saw
someone he knew. It was Phil. Phil covered a slash wound in his right hand with
his left hand.
Dean put his gun back to his
trousers back pocket and rushed toward Phil. For a moments, he saw some glints
of glass shards under Phil’s feet, but he didn’t mind it because he was worried
about Phil’s condition.
“What just happened, Phil?” asked
Dean worriedly.
Phil sat down to the ground.
“I don’t really understand, Dean.
I was walking to my friend’s house and suddenly someone attacked me. I was
scared,” sobbed Phil, “He also threw these two cards and running toward south,”
added him. His left hand pointed to the south while holding the poker cards.
“Two? That’s strange,” said Dean
as he took the cards from Phil’s hand.
“A two-heart card and an ace of
hearts card. What does this means?” murmured Dean, walking slowly toward the direction
that Phil just pointed, leaving Phil behind.
“I don’t know. Maybe there will
be an unusual thing happen?” said Phil. He stood up and followed Dean from
behind.
“Hahaha. As if it would happen,”
laughed Dean.
“But, wait. Why did the criminal
just slash your hand? Don’t they killed all of their previous victims?” said
Dean.
“Well. I don’t know either. Maybe
they did this just for attracting your
attention,” said Phil, walking slowly toward Dean…with a blood-dripping
knife in his left hand.
THE END
I try to figure out what happen but literary i bad in serial detective *sad emo
ReplyDeleteJust read it slowly., you'll get the story eventually.. wkwk
DeleteWaw, your story is very terrif, got me into your story
ReplyDeleteReally? Hahaha
DeleteMaybe I should make another mystery story.. Hahha
It's nice story
ReplyDeleteThank you!(^^)
DeleteIt was the real story or just your imagination?
ReplyDeleteMy imagination., of course. XD
DeleteI like this story. However, less scary for me 😂😂
ReplyDeleteReally predictable plot., isn't it? Wkwk
DeleteI think yes 😂 But, idk with other wkwk
DeleteTHAT IS GREAT STORY. WOULD YOU BECOME THE AUTHOR NOVEL?
ReplyDeleteHahaha.. No.. I don't have passion on that..
DeleteChicago is in America or Netherland?
ReplyDeleteAmerica..
DeleteIts interesting story and scary bro .. but well yea i like this one ... i thought you will bee a great author and made many interesting story based on your imagination... good job bro ^_^
ReplyDeleteThank you..
DeleteThe plot is a bit bland though.. hehe